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Co-authored-by: Patrice Chalin <[email protected]>

Author: julianocosta89

content/en/blog/2025/otel-demo-2.md

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 ## Statistics
 
 With a total of 140 contributors, the OpenTelemetry Demo has been starred
-**2048** times. On October 26, 2022—two days after General Availability—we had a
+**2048** times. On October 26, 2022 — two days after General Availability — we had a
 record 40 stars in a single day. If you use the Demo, consider leaving us a star
 to help promote the project.
 
-There are a total of 1.8k forks of the Demo. Notably, [Abhishek Veeramalla's
+There are a total of 1.8K forks of the Demo. Notably, [Abhishek Veeramalla's
 fork][1] stands out with 142 stars and has been forked 425 times.
 
-The Demo containers have been pulled over **12 million times** (11,809,995 times
-from `ghcr.io` plus 433,000 times from `hub.docker`).
+The Demo containers have been pulled over **12 million times** (11.8M times
+from `ghcr.io` plus 433K times from `hub.docker`).
 
 The OpenTelemetry Demo includes the following CNCF projects:
 
-- OpenTelemetry (of course)
+- [OpenTelemetry](/), of course
 - Envoy
 - OpenFeature/Flagd
 - Jaeger